Transform your child's writing using a proven step-by-step approach
✨ Succeed With Sentence Structure ✨
Help Your Child Write With Confidence and Clarity.
does your child find writing overwhelming?
do they have great ideas but find it hard to put their thoughts into sentences?
succeed with sentence structure is the answer!
***** starts 1st June 2026 *****
Six weekly live lessons for parents and lifetime access to course materials.
when asked to write, does your child.......
✏️ Find it difficult to put their thoughts into sentences?
📚 Use the same few words to start each sentence?
📝 Write short fragments of sentences that don't make sense or let their writing 'run on' without using the correct punctuation?
✒️ Over-use words such as 'and' or 'then'?
📖 Jump from one idea to the next?
🗂️Avoid writing wherever possible?
🧠 Find it difficult to use punctuation correctly?
If so, 'Succeed With Sentence Structure' is the course for you!
enrol now- course goes live on 1st june 2026
For the first time ever, Jane is running 'Succeed with Sentence Structure' with six LIVE weekly sessions for parents filled to the brim with hints and tips to transform your child's writing. You will have lifetime access to the course materials and recordings of the LIVE sessions.
✔ Six weekly LIVE lessons for parents- starting on 1st June
The weekly LIVE sessions are packed full of hints and tips for you to work with your child on each module of the course. Sessions will be recorded for you to re-visit at any time.
✔ Six Carefully Sequenced Modules
Each module builds on the last to steadily strengthen your child’s sentence structure, grammar understanding, and writing fluency.
✔ Narrated PowerPoints for Each Module
Your child can watch, listen, pause, and replay—perfect for different learning styles.
✔ Printer-Friendly Workbooks
These workbooks help children practise and consolidate new skills, turning understanding into long-term confidence.
✔ The Hen Pen Book (PDF Version)
A beautifully designed companion book that supports the teaching in every module.
✔ Lifetime Access
Your family gets lifetime access to all modules and materials. Revisit lessons anytime, with no pressure and no expiry. Use the course materials with all the children in your family!
✔ Bonus: Personal Teacher Feedback
Send your child’s writing to me by email, and I will personally review it.
* Six weekly LIVE sessions for parents
* Lifetime access to:
Recordings
Narrated PowerPoints
Printable workbooks
The Hen Pen book (PDF)
* Personalised feedback on your child's writing
All this for the special introductory price of just £199 - for a limited time only AND with bonus materials!
"We really enjoyed the Succeed with Sentence Structure course. The lessons were engaging and friendly rather than 'school like.' The length of the modules was just right, being long enough to clearly teach the concept without feeling overwhelming, which can sometimes happen with home learning.
The printable worksheets worked brilliantly.
More importantly, she genuinely enjoyed it which says it all!"
Laura, West Heath, Cheshire
Introducing your course leADER AND AUTHOR OF 'THE HEN PEN.'
Jane Oakden is an experienced teacher and proud owner of Succeed Education. With twenty-five years in education, she thrives on helping learners to succeed. Her career spans roles as Assistant Headteacher, English Lead, Class Teacher and Team Leader. She has delivered many CPD training sessions for teachers, assistants and trainees.
In 2017, Jane founded Succeed Education, a thriving tutoring business built on her passion for supporting students to achieve their best. She champions a clear, back-to-basics approach that focuses on key learning skills and creates a step-by-step path to progress.
Jane has created and developed the SUCCEED 'Straight to Success' Writing Methodology. This tried-and-tested method arms children with the tools that they need to SUCCEED with their learning.
wHAT DOES THE COURSE INCLUDE?
✔ Six weekly LIVE lessons for parents
The weekly LIVE sessions are packed full of hints and tips for parents to work with their children on each module of the course. Sessions will be recorded for you to re-visit at any time.
✔ Six Carefully Sequenced Modules
Each module builds on the last to steadily strengthen your child’s sentence structure, grammar understanding, and writing fluency.
✔ Narrated PowerPoints for Each Module
Your child can watch, listen, pause, and replay—perfect for different learning styles.
✔ Printer-Friendly Workbooks
These workbooks help children practise and consolidate new skills, turning understanding into long-term confidence.
✔ The Hen Pen Book (PDF Version)
A beautifully designed companion book that supports the teaching in every module.
✔ Evergreen Access—For Life!
Your family gets lifetime access to all modules and materials. Revisit lessons anytime, with no pressure and no expiry. Use the course materials with all the children in your family!
✔ Bonus: Personal Teacher Feedback
Send your child’s writing to me by email, and I will personally review it.
You’ll receive:
Practical, hands-on activities for you to use at home
📘 Constructive feedback
✏️ Clear next steps
📚 Practical strategies to help your child keep improving
⭐ This personalised support alone is invaluable and it is included as a bonus
***EXTRA SPECIAL BONUS*** The first 10 customers to sign-up get a free hard copy of the Hen Pen book
All this for the special introductory price of just £199 - for a limited time only AND with bonus materials!
📘 The Story That Makes Learning Fun: The Hen Pen
To bring sentence structure to life, your child will explore the charming story The Hen Pen — a delightful tale that doubles as a practical guide to sentence structure.
Your course includes a PDF version of The Hen Pen and a workbook to show how it demonstrates the sentence types which are taught in the course.
This book....
* Shows each sentence type in action
* Helps children to see how and why writers use different structures
* Can be enjoyed as a stand-alone storybook and as a key element of the course
**** BONUS ****
The first 10 people to sign up to Succeed With Sentence Structure will receive a paperback copy of The Hen Pen.
bonus - personalised feedback
As an additional bonus, you will receive personalised feedback on your child's writing. You can submit the writing at any point during the course for Jane to read. She will then provide you and your child with a summary of what they are doing well (great for confidence building) and some areas for further development. This level of personalised support would only usually be available during one-to-one lessons so this is a fantastic opportunity to take advantage of Jane's experience.
Sam's success story
At the start of the school year, writing was the one thing that made Sam’s stomach twist into knots. Every homework task felt like a mountain, every blank page a reminder that he “wasn't good at writing.” Mornings became stressful, and even subjects Sam normally enjoyed were overshadowed by the worry that another writing task might be waiting.
Then Sam started Succeed With Sentence Structure.
Bit by bit, the course broke writing down into simple, friendly steps. Sam learned how sentences fit together, how ideas flow, and how to turn thoughts into clear, confident writing. The strategies were easy to follow - and for the first time, writing didn’t feel scary.
Within weeks, Sam was finishing his school work faster, smiling more, and heading into school without that heavy feeling in his chest. Writing became something he could do - and even enjoy.
Succeed With Sentence Structure didn’t just improve Sam’s writing, it helped him to rediscover confidence, calm, and the joy of learning.
succeed with sentence structure- The cost
All of this for just
£199
✔ Six live sessions for parents filled with hints, tips and teaching points to use as your child works through the course
✔ Six Carefully Sequenced Modules
✔ Narrated PowerPoints for Each Module
✔ Printer-Friendly Workbooks
✔ The Hen Pen Book (PDF Version)
✔ Evergreen Access—For Life!
✔ Bonus: Personal Teacher Feedback
read more of jane's testimonials
Jane, you are amazing! Ruby just came out of her lesson and said, "I feel so much more confident now." Honestly, I can't express how grateful I am."
L Foster
Parent, Congleton, Cheshire
We reached out to Jane at Succeed Education as we were looking for an English tutor for our son. Jane took time to understand where he was struggling and developed sessions to improve his skills in the subject. What a difference her support and guidance has made! Our son has so much more confidence and is really starting to achieve his potential. He really enjoys his sessions which in itself is high praise! We would (and do!) highly recommend Jane at Succeed Education to anyone looking for a tutor.
Elizabeth and Frazer Bristow
West Heath, Cheshire
My son had maths lessons with Jane in his final year of primary school. He went into high school confident in his ability and has spent the last 3 years comfortably in the top set. My daughter then began having lessons and has alternated between Maths and English each week for the past 2 years. She has gained so much self-confidence and has left every lesson feeling positive. She was well prepared for her SATS this year and not in the least bit worried about them which is all thanks to Jane. Jane is patient, kind and tailors the lessons to your child’s needs. I thoroughly recommend this lovely lady. Thanks so much Jane.
Nikki Diggle
Congleton, Cheshire
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